As jail cells went, she’d seen worse.
Compared to Thailand, a holding cell in Paris could be considered luxurious. It
had stainless steel benches bolted to the walls. It smelled like disinfectant
rather than urine. And they even had the courtesy to provide a toilet. Diana Nichols shook
her head as she silently laughed. She’d screwed up again. If she hadn’t been
self-employed, she’d be fired.
Great start! It definitely makes me want to know how she knows so much about jail cells.
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Makes you wonder how many jail cells she's seen.
Wow, interesting beginning, raises so many questions, which is terrific!!!
ReplyDeleteYou've definitely created a strong visual here... and piqued my curiosity! Well done!
ReplyDeleteOh, I love how you set the scene and given us an insight to the character in so few sentences. Nicely done, Letty. :)
ReplyDeleteAnd how does she know so much about jail cells?
ReplyDeleteGreat job.
This tells some about her character. Gets herself into trouble a lot it seems. Nice snippet.
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Oh, I like this heroine. She knows her way around a jail cell--and is even able to give it Michelin ratings. LOL!
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