Mag-Elen swept
nonexistent dust into the fire, propped her broom in a corner, then fled to the
stables to kick the straw that dared get in her way. Faerie and human were no
different in their pettiness and greed, she fumed. They only cared for self
glory. She stumbled and fell against Mayla’s stall door and was instantly
contrite as the horse whinnied and backed away. Mag-Elen stood still and leaned
against the stall door. She was rewarded with the soft nuzzling of Mayla’s
muzzle against her cheek. She couldn’t help comparing the softness of Mayla to
the tenderness of Torloch. The same sweet smell of hay and horseflesh, for
Torloch had been in warrior training and spent most of his day astride. She hid
her tears against the horse’s cheek. No one would ever see her cry. She would
avenge Torloch’s death, but other than killing her own father, what recourse
did she have?
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ReplyDeleteNice snippet! Didn't see that coming & now I want to know what she'll do next. Will she or won't she?
Having one's father kill one's friend/lover would make closure difficult . . . great start!
ReplyDeleteGreat dilemma :-)
ReplyDeleteGreat setup!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the Sunday insanity -- and what a great start! I want to know more -- lots more!
ReplyDeleteThat was very intense. A lot of things happening.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to snippet Sunday. :)
Great start and welcome to the snippers!! Glad you could join us. Now, about killing her father, I could help you hatch a plot...;)
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